some tips for you
this wasnt too bad, but you're going to need to draw more frames between your movements so that they appear to move smoother. funny song, cool ideas, but bad animation. the graphics were cool too, just needs more in between work.
some tips for you
this wasnt too bad, but you're going to need to draw more frames between your movements so that they appear to move smoother. funny song, cool ideas, but bad animation. the graphics were cool too, just needs more in between work.
It's supposed to be a comic style... I guess nobody looks at the authors comments anymore.
ummm... you might try harder next time.
this is not terrible, but there are some things you still need to learn for a worthwhile cartoon. you need to do a little more frame by frame animation instead of just shape and motion tweening your way thru. good ideas here, and not bad graphix, but it needs more charisma than just tweening. i'm sure you'll do better next time, keep on thinkin up those ideas!!!
Yeah thanks for the review! As i said I'm not that good with flash so far thanks though you left a nicer review than the asshole below
not bad
i would rate you higher, it's just your timing is kind of slow. the scenes need to be cut shorter, that's all. i'm still pretty happy about this tho, it's really not bad at all. good ideas, good directing and story.
Yeah, the timing is pretty hard to do, because I had to fit it around the music...
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