Getting better! ahahaha FUCK YOU, it's more porn!!! lmfao
Oh, so HERE's that plot B I was looking for LOL. Very good!
Ahahaha, much better! I dug the buster-sword sheath, that's very clever ahahaha. I also noticed you stopped showing their names every time, and even though I liked the bigger detailed pics of them over the thought bubble, it may have been wise that you removed them for this. For a second episode of a series, I really liked this one. I did like the plot A plot B stories running at once in the last one, but I'm imagining that you have to develop the characters a bit first so early in the series. Nice work, Jeff!
Nice work! I dig it, good to see you producing something! It's what your function is!
All you do for Us.
Thanks for your hard work, Jordan. We will be good friends one day! Love and Light! Namaste!
oh we already are!
Very good visuals, not my style of humor, but overall a good cartoon.
10 for Animation
Loved the frame by frame, very epic, very smooth. Had a classic feel to it, very natural. 10 for animation!
It's good quality drawings, but it lacks smoothness as far as natural motions go. Timing is everything, so just work it a little more and I know you'll do great. For a first flash to make Daily Feature is unheard of in my eyes, so you're at least on the right track. Can't wait to see what you come up with when you start writing your own material!
Better than the last one, definitely.
Fucking scary, man, nice job.
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