my gosh
very nice work. your scene angles and story work make this a very heart warming clip. definately pro work here.
my gosh
very nice work. your scene angles and story work make this a very heart warming clip. definately pro work here.
Thanks man. Yeah, I really wanted to try out new camera angles. Usually alot of cartoons keep a flat perspective. It was fun too because most of the angles were a big challenge, especially the part where he runs into his father. Took me one total day to just do the planning and animatics for that scene. Thanks for the review man. I'll tell you that storyboarding definitely helped me plan out everything
hmm
this is not an episode of anything. shouldnt it be an actual movie? i would collab with you if you did something serious. otherwise the kitty krew is nothing, it's just a bunch of self promoters that dont really do anything other than that. also, the back button doesnt work on the "pr0n' one. you have the potential, please use it!
great party man
nice use of trans-siberian orchestra! also a great story line and wonderful comic-style inked effect. detail was great, sound was alright, and the script development was great!!! the part where it pans up to the moon is a little jerky tho, maybe you might want to fix it. nice work buddy!!!
i've been getting that from a few users, i'm seeing what i can do about it. try setting the quality lower.
cool
i think you have the stick figures "FIGURED" out, so maybe you should try a real character fight between more people-esque shapes. (i.e. 2 ninjas or something, or aliens, i dunno wtf)
cool work
thanx yeh i might
not bad
not bad work, in fact rather professional LOOKING. now the audio wasnt bad either, but i think you need some script work on this. it kind of drags out on n the jokes. good ideas, and they were funny, but the time gaps were annoying, and there was no bg music really. i would love to help you write something tho, so keep me in mind. i can't wait to see the next one!
not bad
normally i dont like sprite videos or videos in other languages, but this was pretty funny and plus i know enough spanish to get most of what was happening :P not bad for a white boy, eh? i gave you a 3/5 and a 7/10. just remember, most people will not vote high on this because of the language alone. not everyone is a spanish speaking whiteboy like me!!!
not bad
well i've got to say, you have a good attitude for what you want in a review. i can help you there. this is not bad, but you will definately want to improve your smootheness and comfortableness with what you are drawing. this has a very sketchy feel to it. i could tell you worked hard on it, tho, it's just that for your next one, make sure you use your border better to your advantage for the effects your are presenting, and smoothe out your lines. maybe even do some practice shots that you dont upload here, just do them to become comfortable with your style and with the characters you are drawing. cool stuff, tho, i cant wait for your next one!
NICE
nice work, it has a very "new reggae" feel to it. also, what did you use, was it flash? in other words, i wonder what inspired you to bring this to newgrounds besides networking. good job, pretty pro work.
all animations are made in flash,and I did keying and colour correction in adobe premiere.it's an old video and I think that lots of people will see it here.thanx for review! :)
I've been animating as long as I've been on Newgrounds, proudly bringing you super-okay animation right here for over 16 years! Let's collab!
Age 38, Male
Animator
PCC
Portland, OR
Joined on 5/15/03