smirkstudios's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[From Player to Playa]

hahaha

this was very original, and oddly so because you used icons and the eminem idea, but somehow it really shined the originality anyways. very creative idea, and clear with little to no pixelation. congrats on king of the portal by the way!!!

[Sketched - Last Requests]

hahahaha

turned out GREAT, man! good job! altho, if i do say so myself, i really didnt like the alternate line during the part where he rotates the tires. the original line was cleaner and moved the story along a little better. LOL but dont be discouraged, i just offer opinion! it looked very colorful and vivid, and i enjoyed working on it. maybe next time i will do a better job lol, now that we have our foot in the door :D

sirjeffofshort responds:

Both lines were amazing takes by Lori however I decided to go with the one I did for technical reasons more than anything else but it just goes to show you that there is no defined rule when it comes to comedy. The same line and sentiment interpreted two completely different ways can be funny either way.

I still tout that the backgrounds help to make this the best looking episode yet. Great job to yourself, and thanks for all your hard work. Any time you want to work with us again the door is open.

[Tomm-E]

nice work

the story was very cute, and i enjoyed the wall-E hints and feelings. only prollem is that i thought at first that "tomm-E" was refering to tom fulp. lol i guess if i ever see the name tom on newgrounds, that's what i think automatically. luckily your author comments helped a lot to clear it up for me. cute with great graphics and feeling.

[TIH - Hugs]

nice

very nice pilot. the jokes might need some fine tuning, but considering the quality and originality factors, this is very clean and shows very smoothe animation. and it's not that the jokes are bad, its that they might only reach a certain audience, and even then might not spark that giggle you're working for. i cant wait to see where you go with this, keep it up :D

[Happy birthday RUDY!]

poop

this is fine as a birthday present, but not a NG submission. just email it to your buddy, i'm sure he'll love it. i know if it was my b-day and my friend made an ani for me i would.

doomshock responds:

i did
he told me too

[The Provider]

righteous

that was pretty cool man. i can tell this isnt one of your proud works, but it still has your style all over it and doesnt really have that commercially advertisement feel. more of that homey feel that you always pull off nicely. (i thought the bowl of water was soup at first)

[le parkour (short)]

cool

well the frame by frame work was good, but i'm afraid that it didnt offer much variety. maybe if he did more than summersaults, like a gainer off one of the buildings, a side flip thing or 2, maybe even some hand springs. sorry for the low score bro, this wasnt really bad, but needs more attention.

[Red VS Blue - The battle]

cool

looks good. the only thing i could ask for is a better variety of colors, some sound effects, and maybe some better character development. over all, it looks great. did you draw this up with your mouse?

Zyrix-Xela responds:

Yes, and I actually just spent three days making this, so it isn't so very good.

[Lazy Birthday, Lazyfeet!]

NICE

the only prollem i noticed was the bottom right checker's animation ends up looping out of place, and the last frame is not readable. other than that LAZYFEET IS THE TITS!!!

[The Boston Massacre]

well, better

this is better than your last one, but it will still need plenty more frame by frame work. this is about what i would expect from 7 hours tho, and a school project also. better, but remember, it takes about 10 hours for something to look good, and 50 plus hours to look excellent. also, remember, it doesnt have to be long either. chances are, the more time you spend on less length, the better quality those few frames will be. i usually do my stuff in 5 hours sittings, that way the quality of my work doesnt really change. 5/10 2/5 (that means i saved you passing judgement :P (which is good))

MZRAK responds:

thank you! you have really helped me in my past flashes i submitted.