Score: 9

"HAHAHA"

submission: Sketched - Babies

date: November 3, 2009

BABY MATRIX!!!

Good stuff, buddy :P Dibs on the first compiled DVD prototype! I really liked that you did the jaws with the lip sync, it adds without taking away. Can't wait for the next project! Motivated!!!

Score: 7

"WOW"

submission: CHIBIE!: Friction burns

date: November 2, 2009

Very good use of frame by frame work, seems like you didn't use any tweens. I was no better than this when I started, and your motions are pretty nice. Work on smoothing them out on your next toon, and hopefully you keep working hard and having fun :D Great job, says I.

Score: 10

"Way to go ME!"

submission: Sketched - Souvenirs

date: October 4, 2009

The reason this is SO GOOD graphically is because of the WRITING in this one. The sketch is hip and funny, with some real heavy camera work. I think it's SO perfect, and I swear it's not bias, PROMISE!!!

Score: 9

"There we go!!"

submission: Sketched - Haunted Fax

date: September 3, 2009

I think this one shows the audience that last week definitely was a teaser, and this is REALLY what your game is all about. Lots of classic "Sketched" stylings, and beautiful execution at the end with the stabbing! That part was done better than I could have at this point. You continue to teach us and amaze us, Jeff! You have a strong team, no doubt!

Score: 9

"jeeez"

submission: The Transformer

date: August 19, 2009

That wide-angled lens closeup you did of the person character was some choice animation for sure. Very clean work, and I love the conversion of new to old, that's very funny stuff!

Score: 4

"Not this time."

submission: Batman: Bright Day

date: August 19, 2009

Well, I hate to do it, but this is simply 2 pictures with moving mouths and a funny script, and that didn't do it for me. Your name is big to me, but I still vote on quality based on several factors OTHER than your credentials. Nice drawings, though!

Score: 8

"good, but.."

submission: Pacman 3

date: August 18, 2009

I liked the work you did on this toon A LOT. It was really good. HOWEVER, all of your transitions were fades, and that should be used to express longer periods of time. Because of the fade outs, I felt like the events were taking longer than they really were. Try just flat cutting to the next motion or panning across a scene with the camera motions. Nice work!

Score: 9

"cool"

submission: Machete Overkill

date: August 18, 2009

The special effects and editing are pretty sweet in your trailer here! I wish it wasn't stick figures, but it's still credible. I really like the TV static and camera malfunctioning shots, and the timing was very dramatic and well executed. Good Job!

Score: 9

"Alrighty"

submission: Life in the Portal: Clock

date: August 18, 2009

Good job, Nick and Sam! I really liked that panning shot of the happy green scenery, that was very clean. Nick, good to see you're writing some strong stuff! You guys make a pretty good team in this one, I want more!!!

Score: 8

"Yes!"

submission: The Crew Talks Art

date: August 15, 2009

Good to see some more from you, Mr. Palin, I was definitely happy. Seeya around sometime!